zef7's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[stick mania]

pretty good

It was good,I liked the running and the blood on the "camera" but I think you could improve it:
-Don't make him run everytime,it looks kinda weird.
-Make him stop and look around himself,especially when he plants the bomb
-When the bomb explodes,he becomes red,try to fix this because it's not real.
-When we see only his legs,it's weird,try to fix his knee.

Otherwise,great job,8/10

[Drawing Tutorial]

thanks!!

Thanks a lot for this tutorial,helped a lot even if i don't use flash!!I love your manga style and I think you should make more tutorials like that but with object and weapons and stuff!!!

[tarzan]

good but should be longer

I really liked your animation,good graphics,good sound,tarzan is funny and it's original but you should work on it to make it a bit longer but it's really good so I give it a 3!

[Bill Murray Tribute]

bad

this is bad,boring and annoying but i liked the music!!!you could better and if it was humoristic: i didn't laugh!!